http://doctorzebra.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] doctorzebra.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] musicalluna 2010-11-06 04:27 pm (UTC)

I love so much of it, how to choose? :D

The beginning is just so sweet and adorable and sad. Shawn seems like such a little kid here which makes it that much sweeter.
Shawn's little freakout was, ugh, I don't know XD I kind of have a thing for nightmare freakouts, weird as it may be. Any sort of mental snaps are wonderful, though, and it's the same reason I love that part in the next one when he finally admits why he's looking out the window .3.
Nosebreak!whump, need I say more? I love whump in all of its many facets.
The ending was so adorable, and still highly in character despite everything C: A little glimpse of normality in this twisty world'd fic.

Plus, the entire thing is just so beautifully written. I love your writing so much lD I've read all your fics multiple times, over at PF.com. I was searching for fellow Shules-ers on here, to find a group I could join or something, when I stumbled upon this and got sucked in yet again~
But I'd love to find out more about what happened before this, to make Shawn act so out of character for him. I'm fascinated with this little world of yours :)

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